Pretender of hearts
Wednesday, January 8, 2014
We both are silent through the miles
posted by Sajini Lakshika Chandrasekera @ 12:45 PM,
7 Comments:
- At January 8, 2014 at 1:25 PM, Zaffariqbal Durrani said...
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- At January 8, 2014 at 2:00 PM, Unknown said...
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- At January 8, 2014 at 3:22 PM, chandana said...
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No sajini I presume and believe that this came out from u genuinely from the heart of u rs. Why I say is that u r thoughts cannot be governed by u r mind. Anyway I like it
- At January 8, 2014 at 6:56 PM, Unknown said...
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@ Chandana Gunatilake ......
Thank you for your encouraging words and yes these did come straight from the heart and these words were what I felt inside. - At January 10, 2014 at 8:53 PM, Darlene From the North Coast said...
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Sajini, I would rather read thoughts from the heart, instead of poetry made to allow the words to flow & rhyme. Your Blog has been an inspiration to me & as you know, I relate to your words on so many levels. You have a special gift of expressing yourself with words that allow others to relate & heal their hurts. BLESS YOU <3
- At January 13, 2014 at 2:39 PM, Unknown said...
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Darlene From the North Coast......
Thank you so much for your lovely comment and your lovely words. I'm honored and it is always a pleasure to know that my words have healed your wounds. God bless you. - At June 30, 2014 at 7:05 PM, Literary Works said...
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First stanza rhymes well , better if it continued to next three. Well written with deep expression
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