Broken heart
Friday, November 23, 2012
I keep searching in all places
posted by Sajini Lakshika Chandrasekera @ 11:42 AM,
9 Comments:
- At November 23, 2012 at 11:49 AM, krishan said...
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Beautiful and touching
- At November 23, 2012 at 11:52 AM, Power Angel said...
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Nice poem, touching
- At November 23, 2012 at 12:21 PM, said...
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Wish to be "deep in your heart and in your soul." Nice piece.
- At November 23, 2012 at 4:12 PM, Deb Sistrunk Nelson said...
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"Deep in my heart" -- I understand this. Another beautifully written piece.
- At November 23, 2012 at 8:54 PM, Kausar Bilal said...
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Simply Awesome!!!
- At November 23, 2012 at 10:32 PM, Ayyub Kulla said...
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Bit garrulous girl’s thoughts coming out of her core of heart in shape of such touching couplets
- At November 23, 2012 at 10:36 PM, Ayyub Kulla said...
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Bit garrulous girl’s thoughts coming out of her core of heart in such a nice and touching manner is really amazing.
- At November 26, 2012 at 5:27 PM, Unknown said...
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Thank you all for the lovely comments and encouraging words.
- At March 6, 2014 at 7:59 PM, said...
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In first four lines you are searching your partner where he is suppose to be...In a second pera. your memories in past,. the way with so much of love, you enjoyed with your partner. you expressed so beautifully ... In third pera..How your heart was broken and pain in side your broken heart...fourth Pera. Even though you hurt me my heart cant let you go... final Pera .Apart from i am still loving and Keep on loving Becoz in every corner.. of my life you are.. you have presented past present and future and the ultimate is still i am not going to leave loving you... so beautiful..and proud to be your friend
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