That Painful Moment
Friday, July 20, 2012
That day , that time , that moment
I was stabbed with pain of loosing
It shook my world and tore my heart
Knowing that i was blind all along
Life is not easy and i knew it
Pain and tears have played their role
Strength and courage roared through time
But still i was afraid of loosing
Walking out was easy but surviving was hard
Staying in was hard but that was the game
Fighting a battle with love and care was the play
Winning with grace was the final destination
posted by Sajini Lakshika Chandrasekera @ 3:30 PM,
12 Comments:
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At July 20, 2012 at 3:43 PM,
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This is what makes love so hard...
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At July 20, 2012 at 3:59 PM,
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From the very first of your poems i've read and this is a different style i see, yet the feelings of a heart is beautifully laid out ..
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At July 20, 2012 at 4:15 PM,
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Love is never easily given or taken and it's hard work but worth in the end .
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At July 20, 2012 at 4:51 PM,
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I acciendently found this blog and read all articles and really loved all the poems as they were in simple form of understanding. This is a very touching poem . Thank you
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At July 20, 2012 at 4:58 PM,
Unknown said...
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@ Anonymous....
Yes love is hard work . Thank you for your coment -
At July 20, 2012 at 4:59 PM,
Unknown said...
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@ Power Angel ...
Yes this poem came out little differently than the rest but i think what i had to say was clear . Thank you -
At July 20, 2012 at 4:59 PM,
Unknown said...
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@ Sreeni ...
Thank you -
At July 20, 2012 at 5:00 PM,
Unknown said...
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@ Thilini..
Nothing is easy in life and so is love ..and as you say it's worth the price . Thank you for your thoughts -
At July 20, 2012 at 5:02 PM,
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@ Anonymous...
I'm glad even though acciedently you visited my blog and happy that you enjoyed what i've written . Hope to see you here and thank you . -
At July 21, 2012 at 12:40 PM,
Zaffariqbal Durrani said...
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A very nice piece.You seems to have the nag for sad ones. Life is not all sad. Our writings and our attitude effect our modes and body. These type of writing or reading end up in depression. All those like me who always let go of sadness and only keep the happy side of life are always Happy and glowing. Try it
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At July 21, 2012 at 12:42 PM,
Zaffariqbal Durrani said...
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Hey, you have not taken my advice regarding comments. I feel bad to see my comment wait for approval.
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At July 22, 2012 at 1:59 PM,
Unknown said...
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@ Durrani.....
Thank you so much for your wonderful thoughts. Well, life experiences are a mixture of happy moments and sadness and what makes the journey with while is how you react to certain issues in life and i do agree with you . That how much we may surround with sadness we should only seek happiness and let go of things which makes negative impact in-our lives ...
I'm soo sorry that your comment was not publish immediately and will not happen again....Again thank you for your thoughts and advices .
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